Funkangeles

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Friday Fictioneers: Paths

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We all can choose…

Out of all the paths to travel.

the one that ends.

At sand and starts at seas

always been

a happy moment

for me…

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Hi  Fictioneers!!

Thanks  Rochelle

I’m a fan..

Thanks  Randum Muzer. 🙂

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Author: Funkangeles

Finding myself one story at time..and... Really, where are you? My Band.. Musically inclined to encourage humans and non humans, to enjoy themselves...

14 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers: Paths

  1. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers, Funk. Short and sweet. Happy to have you aboard.
    shalom,
    Rochelle

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  2. Nicely done. Let me warn you it’s an addiction. 🙂 And this is coming from a person who joined just a few weeks back.

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  3. the one that ends.
    At sand and starts at seas
    always been
    a happy moment

    i have to make a suggestion. you’re talking about a path, and then you said “the one that ends…” so ‘the one” means the path that makes you happy. but then you said “always been a happy…” i think you might need to put “has” in front of “always been.” so you can then say, “has always been a happy…” your choice of course.

    also, you wrote that it “…always been a happy moment…” key word – moment. but you’re talking about a “path” being “the one that ends at sand and starts at sea…” a path is a thing, not a moment. in order to call it a “moment,” you might need to add a word or two so it says something like “reaching the one that ends…always been a happy moment…” the action of reaching something can be a “moment.” otherwise, a path is a thing. so you can replace “moment” with “place.”

    just a suggestion.

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  4. Short and condensed. I like that 🙂

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